Sunday, May 9, 2010

Voice

I wonder what it would feel like
to be a Voice.
Nameless and faceless.
just a voice.
No silly heart beating away madly
everytime i see him.
No eyes glistening with tears
giving away my feelings.
No creases on my forehead
giving away my deepest thoughts
No hands shaking with fear.
No fake smile on my lips
To hide a tear.

3 comments:

  1. this is just the first draft. didnt get time to work on this. will keep making changes as and when i get time.

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  2. Wow! I see a lot of improvement!!!!!! I love it!!!

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  3. a voice may be nameless and faceless, but there's so much it can give away too. The beating heart, the glistening eyes and the creased forehead all have their little hints in your voice... There's no way you can hide a tear from someone who knows where to look for it.

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